i think wackmo meant is instead of in. the sentence would make more sense if it had is replacing the in. just saying
here's a way to improve:
have ranks or special rewards for completing an achievement that u (Thekrafter1923) created. an achievment such as,
killing someone with no armor with an un-enchanted bow. however, you/I would have to witness the event to make sure it is true. then that person would get a reward for completing the achivement. that's my idea for making clan better.
if u decide to use this idea, i would like to be one of the main ones who creates the achievments.
also, can u tell ur clan members to start thinking of new names for the soon to be merged clan?